Literary Productions Reconstruction and Reimagination 'Titanic'

 

Literary Productions
Reconstruction and Reimagination

Titanic

 

Member :  Muhammad Husain Nur Faiz Assyifa (2109010001)
Muhammad Habib Mufti (2109010028)
Adilah Al Istiqomah (2109010037)
Vierel Maulana Nibras Athallah (2109010038)
Mochamad Riza Fahlivi (2109010039)
Aliya Nur Rahma (2109010047)
                                         

                One day at the army headquarters there was a soldier named David who was going to say goodbye to his superiors to go take his day off.

                "Here's your money Dave". General said.

                "Okay, thank you."

then David walked out carrying his bag out of the camp and waited on the terrace standing to wait for the car to pick him up. Then a car came.

                "Come on Dave, come on up."

                "Don't rush, take it easy"

                "Do you want to leave the Titanic which will sail for the first time?"

                "No, fine let's go"

David and the driver headed to the Titanic's Homeport in Southampton, United Kingdom. When he got there, David got off and did not forget to bring his luggage. The driver asked Dave,

                "Where are you going, Dave?"

                "New York, because I want to survey there"

                "What for?"

                "American Dream"

David left the driver and bought a boat ticket with the money he earned from his hard work, after buying the ticket, David headed for the ship and climbed the stairs. After a while, the ship started sailing and David waved to the humans who were happy with the Titanic sailing for the first time. David took a walk in the boat, then got out to see the ocean view and looked down. David thought about moving to America. He is just a soldier who is well-off but not very rich. Then David had dinner listening to lively music. Then there was a woman who lost her engagement ring. The woman's name was Victoria. He is from a noble family. When the ring was found by David, he did not take it for the ring is expensive. Then David stopped the music going on and grabbed the mic from the vocalist and said,

"Whose is this ring?"

Then a woman and a man beside her headed to the front of the orchestra to retrieve the ring that David had found. Then the man invited us to eat together.

"Hi, my name is Phil, and my fiancé is called Victoria. I will invite you to eat together"

"You can if you don't mind. My name is David, usually called Dave."

Then they ate together. Finally, David also met Victoria's mother. Then they talk about work, where they live, family, and hobbies. Victoria is the woman who loves Phil which they prove is engaged.

                In the morning David went to the porch and sat in a chair with coffee at his table reading the newspaper. Phil is coming,

"Hey Dave what news did you read"

"Hi, I read the news about the massive transmigration to America"

"Okay, you want a beer?"

"Sorry, I don't drink beer, I warm up with coffee"

Then Phill smoked, finished smoking he sat down with David. Next, David asked Phil,

"You are really lucky"

"What kind of luck do you mean?"

"You are a businessman, and have a charming fiancé, you deserve it, you can always buy her a beautiful dress"

"Hmmm…. Dave do you know what I am like, what all I have now does not make me happy. I feel empty"

Then Phill left, then David was silent.

One lonely night Phil tries to kill himself, but is noticed by David who has just come from the toilet.

"Phill, what are you doing?"

"Go away!!!"

"No! Don't jump"

Then, David ran towards Phill, but Phil was already diving head down and feet up. David finally tries to help Phil, swims, and finally succeeds. Phil managed to get on board and was assisted by several people. The atmosphere was quite lively, Phil passed out, David was weak, and they were both given blankets. The medical lady came and examined Phil saying to David,

"I wish you were a Muslim"

"Yes I am a Muslim"

"Really? you're so good"

"Yes, thank you" with weakness mixed with cold.

"What's your name?"

"David Wilson but call me Dave"

 

Then came Victoria,

"What happened to the two of them?"

Someone said,

                "This man tried to kill himself and then this British man helped him".

                "Dave, thank you very much," said Victoria.

Phil woke up,

"I thought I was dead, but trying to kill myself is bad, shortness of breath"

"Next time, don't do it again. David said.

His mother Victoria also thanked David and gave him a monetary reward. David finally felt grateful for what he had achieved so far. through this event, he can learn. They have been best friends since they first met.

"Dave you are my friend," said Phil.

"Of course"

After everything is in good condition, a medical woman named Violet falls in love with David because she sees the good and the strengths, not the shortcomings. Phill, Victoria and his mother returned to their deck.

"Dave I'll go upstairs"

"Okay, enjoy your life and be grateful"

They smiled, and Phill also gave a thumbs up. Violet was packing up her medical tools with a cheerful face. Violet is a graceful, beautiful, caring, and kind woman. He said to Dave,

"Dave, why are you still sitting there, it's too late?"

"I am not sleepy"

"Eh, by the way, tomorrow morning we'll take a walk in the ship huh"

"Okay"

"Hurry up to your room to rest"

David is now infatuated with Violet. David went to the room and said,

"see you tomorrow morning"

"OK"

Day Morning.

After David got ready, he headed to the medical room and looked for Violet. And the two of them met and walked around telling stories, it was Violet who preceded the conversation, she was very enthusiastic,

"Mmm... Dave what do you do"

"I'm just an army soldier"

"It doesn't matter Dave, whatever your current position is, run it first, later you will be able to get promoted, the most important thing is that you must always be grateful."

"How about you? You are a health worker, you must earn a lot."

"Alhamdulillah". Violet is a Muslim.

"But being a health worker shouldn't be for business, right?"

 "Ahh you, thoughts from where?"

"I used to read philosophy books a lot"

"Forget it. Positive thinking is what will make you happy and healthy.

"Can"

Until night falls,

"Let's have dinner".

"Too".

Over dinner with Violet asking for a song to play, the vocalist said,

"Yeah, the lady in front, what song do you want?

"My Heart will go on”

After dinner was over, Violet walked up to the front of David's room,

Goodnight Dave. with a smile

"night"

"But, I want to say, pants jeans you are good"

"Thank You"

"Did you sleep in your pants jeans"

"Can"

"Huh, weird" while laughing.

David went into the bedroom and fell asleep. When at 02:20 the Titanic sank, this was a disaster. Violet went straight to David's room and opened the door, but Violet couldn't wake David because her co-workers dragged her to the lifeboat (small lifeboat), Victoria and her mother, Phil, were already on the lifeboat first. After this incident, many victims died. she screamed,

"Dave where are you! I haven't had the chance to say I love you! Dave I promise to marry you! I will be the mother of our children, Dave!". While crying.

A few days later, Violet heads to the Titanic survivor evacuation site to find Dave,

"Sir is there a victim named David Wilson"

"Not in this room try another room"

After searching, Violet finally met Dave who was unconscious, Violet whispered,

                “Daaaaveee….”

David opened his eyes as he turned and said,

                "Violet you are still beautiful," he said with a limp body.

Violet cried, seeing David's condition. Then Violet asked,

"Dave, how did you survive?"

"Because of Allah's help, and I was floating on the surface because of these jeans that could make me float, then I was rescued by rescue workers."

Then Violet said,

                "I'm in love with you Dave, and I promised to marry you"

                "Is this true love?" said David.

The End

 

 

Feedback :
From Putri Syahara Arini  : this story made me quite touched, the storyline is good, there is a moral value and describes a Muslim who always grateful for anything, and then there is romance in it however, I was surprised when Phil suddenly plunged into the sea and maybe you can explain the reasons that made him depressed and want to end his life.